The kick isn't so good also the pads doesn't sound good. try to fix that ;)
and more melodies :D try to build up the song until the final burst where al becomes one :D
Keep it going!!!
~Forever Bound~
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The kick isn't so good also the pads doesn't sound good. try to fix that ;)
and more melodies :D try to build up the song until the final burst where al becomes one :D
Keep it going!!!
~Forever Bound~
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
I noticed that the main pad does sound a bit overpowering. Thanks for the feedback. What software do you use? I'm using FL 10 and looking to collab with someone, in hopes that I can study how other users go about using FL and create better songs with others.
This sounds good keep it going ;)
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The kick is to loud.
but the rest sounded good, really
Keep it going ;)
~Forever Bound~
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
I didn't have headphones atm... and thanks, you're really good too.
Sounds pretty nice. but try to master it better ;)
Keep it going ;)
~Forever Bound~
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
Well I'm glad you liked it overall (and thanks) :D, yah I agree tho, I need to get my volume higher especially... (I must admit I made this pretty quickly tho :P) I most certainly will!!!!
i would have put in more instruments and melo's after 1:30 it was getting boring.
Also try to master your sounds better and the clap kan be much better as this ;)
keep it going!!
~Forever Bound~
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
Thanks for the feedback! :)
I understand I could have experimented with my insturments, especially in certain parts of the tune, but whenever I tried to add something to it, it just seemed to sound out of place compared to what I already thought was quite nice xD
I'm not too good at mastering tbh, so I guess I should get better at that... and I can never find a decent clap xD
The vocals can be a bitt better.
but the total song is awsome ;)
Keep it going ;)
~Forever Bound~
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
Thanks!
I would use some better claps the kick is nice but a bit to overwelming. the hihat's are also good. the instruments used for the melo don't sound so good. and the bass is also a bit overwelming.
keep working on your tracks ;)
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I was thinking the exact same thing when i listened to the song after i listened to it for a while. Thanks man! i'll check your songs out.
It needs more flow man. the instruments are also a bit weird.
but never give up making music ;)
Keep it going
~Forever Bound~
ps: check out my songs
Thanks man :D I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my music! I've listened to yours and it's amazing, I will never give up! I'm going to keep trying! bye bro!
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