As usually an amazing mix. I love it!
The bass and kick really work well together.
I do feel that sometimes the snare is a little bit too loud.
Can't wait for you to finish it :)
thanks bro! appreciate the feedback alot ;)
although sometimes the snare being too loud, is it just too harsh or is it really too loud for your ears?
Anyhow, i will do something with the critism so dont worry ;)
have a good one from all 3 of us!
Sounds nice, I can't wait to hear the full version. keep it up man :D
I really like this remix. I think it's one of the best remixes I've heared from Stereo Madness. Better said, you even inspired me with this remix. Keep it going :D
It sounds cool man, thanks for remixing my track. The only bit of feedback I have is to try to change the melodies a bit more in the future rather then only add different sounds to the exsisting melodies. This will give your remix more of your own taste and flavor. Don't be afraid to experiment or go wild with that.
Thx a lot! I'm proud you like it, i'll try in the future to experiment more and more! See ya! 8D
Really fresh and new sounding house track, I haven't heard anything like this before :)
I love the sounds you have used in it.
Intro isn't really getting me into the as it feels more like a break.
I love the main melody.
Missing bass though, especially if you have a "small" melody you wanna have a decent amount of bass around it and as clean as posible sounds.
at 2:40 or so we get some chords, you chould have started with that ;)
Missing some white noises going down in the main melody part or somebody saying ahhh.
outro feelt pretty sudden.
defenitly original and really fresh :)
Thanks for the detailed feedback!
Wow, Just wow, The energy in this track is amazing.
The intro is so good and so professional.
The kick and bass together omg.
We get the pluck playing the melody which is simple but amazing love it.
The translition is good but you might wanna add a small lead sweep in it so we can hear the main sound of the synth coming up.
The main melody is in my case the worst part of the whole track, you left out some notes from the melody before it and it doesn't play fluently, it doesn't get me off in the air while I was waiting to jump from the moment the tracks started.
not only is the melody missing strengt the synth itself sound a bit really muddy and not 1 part and maybe even a bit pushed.
the tom drums are good but don't feel like they are timed right. I'm missing the small hihat's claps a bit since they hide under the main synth.
I love the piano break shame that the track ends there :/
overal an amazing track with so much potential that it's insane.
Keep it going man :)
Thanks man, Your review means a lot :D
I get what you're saying with the sweep of the main melody as a transition, I probably should have added that, but now its something i can know for next time.
As for the main melody, do you know any way to give it more "strength" because that is honestly the part where i struggle the most.
The high hats and claps are a bit hidden i agree. Thats just my EQing faults lol
Thanks for the review :)
Great track, It's simple yet entertaining. I love the unusual refreshing sounds. Again you manage to deliver a true piece of art. It loops flawless and I hope you are gonna win the NIM with this piece :)
Thanks Forever Bound!! I hope so too!! :D
I'm trying to help you here as much as I can so don't take the things I said as an insult :)
I think this track might be really good for geometry dash, it has a really nice flow. I love it that it just starts a bit slow then it's going fast, then it slows down again and then it goes fast again.
The thing I think you might want to work on a bit are the drum sounds and the mixing of the track. also miss the bass abit.
I miss hihat's, and a good snare. the kick you use is a more rock kick then a video game one.
Thx much, but I am not using FL Studio. I am using a program called Overture. It is made for piano music sheets and barely has other instruments. It only has a track called percussion and the percussion misses a lot of real beats. But thank you for the comment anyways! Now I am waiting for somebody to scout me because I can't use my song without being scouted!
ps: I really love your stereo madness and stereo madness 2
Some of the melodie's and chord progressions sound really familiar but that could be just me. The track is awsome. the kick does feels a bit pushed and boosted in the mix. also the hihat's are a bit to much to the background in my opinion. This is defenitly an interresting piece of music you have here and I think you are worthy to be scouted for the NG audio portal ;)
I don't really like the middle part cause of the bass and kick there, I do like the melody's
Keep it going man and you will do really well here ^^
Thanks for the scout man, appreciate it!
The middle is kind of meh, I agree. The transition to it isn't the greatest either, maybe I'll come back to this one in the future.
Lovely track man, Keep that happy vibe going.
Thank you man!!
Such an honor to get Forever Bound commenting on my audio!! :D
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