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[Flying Battery Zone (RMX)]

It sounds pretty cool although the instruments for the main lead need some work and i think that i hear some false notes ( never heard the original )

but keep it up !!!

NucleonC3 responds:

There aren't any false notes (not really sure what you mean).

If you are talking about the 16th note delay for the other synth in the melody, well I just added that because it sounded cool.

Thanks!

~ Nucleon

[Hardstyle World WIP]

the translitions need work just like the kick and the total mastering. but the piano is actually cool. also layer your lead sounds and add some cool effects

but I like the way that u are trying HS :D
Keep it Up :)

Lyrebird responds:

Thanks for the advice. Cheers!

[LoveLights(MelodyPreview)]

This is really great keep it going ;)

[WiP]

Sounds really nice actually would love to hear the total song. it could use some more bass but well it's just a WIP ;)

[Cirrus]

first of all the kick needs more power and try to master it better. some more melody's and less repetisme would also be great it does sound pretty desent so good job.

Keep it up ;)

[Sky Dreaming]

sound pretty nice especially because it's an older track. the things that i miss here is some badass bass and it needs to be masterd better also I'm hearing some stolen melody's at 1:25.

but keep it up ;)

[Transformers Trance]

The only thing that u need to make better is the mastering of the total track. some of the fx sounds are to powerfull and i'm hearing some bad sidechain on it. the ectually melody is a bit to much to the background and needs to be more to the front. but beside that this track is really nice. especially if u made this in 30 min

so keep it up ;)

[Anasi - Violet]

your piano is really nice, also the kick needs more punch and less bass. i'm missing a clap and some hihat's also the buildup wasn't that good. also add some more background layers because it's sounding a bit empty sometimes.

although the rest is pretty awsome needs a bit more mastering etc but I'm hearing a lot of potential in this track so keep it up ;)

Anasi responds:

I did a little more mastering, I kinda lost touch for working on this too long in one sitting.

This is First build, it will build again after this :3

[Collapse (DnB Preview)]

intro sounds nice. would love to hear the snare comes out of the mix more just like the hihat's ( would suggest u use a more punchier snare) also the arangement of the song needs some more improvements try to make some good build up sections before u change it. also when the bass is on it's own it's a bit weak just like the drums.

so u need to master it a bit better good luck ;)

[DJ DJ - Ur Mom = Ur Dad]

It doesn't really have any progression in it and it sounds really weird. It does sound a bit like Hardcore/Happy Hardcore and i guess that that's your goal to reach. I would suggest that u go back to the writing table and add some nice mello's in it. also deleted the lyrics in it it doesn't sound so good. the only really good thing in it is the kick. also try to layer your kick a bit more use snare, hihat's and claps to layer your kick and build it up.

so what really needs to be done are some nice melody's ( try some super saws ) and the total arangement of the song

Keep it up ;)

Casualty responds:

Appreciate the feedback, but you should know that all of my "DJ DJ" songs are actually a joke... Never meant to put more than 1-2 hours of effort in there.