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ForeverBound

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It doesn't really have any progression in it and it sounds really weird. It does sound a bit like Hardcore/Happy Hardcore and i guess that that's your goal to reach. I would suggest that u go back to the writing table and add some nice mello's in it. also deleted the lyrics in it it doesn't sound so good. the only really good thing in it is the kick. also try to layer your kick a bit more use snare, hihat's and claps to layer your kick and build it up.

so what really needs to be done are some nice melody's ( try some super saws ) and the total arangement of the song

Keep it up ;)

Casualty responds:

Appreciate the feedback, but you should know that all of my "DJ DJ" songs are actually a joke... Never meant to put more than 1-2 hours of effort in there.

Really nice mate didn't expect this actually :D
but love it keep it going :D

Cahzmana responds:

me neither, but thanks u anyways lolz

Nice Work i would suggest to give the instruments a bit more breathing area. Do don't use too much soundgoodnizer

Really Cahzmana style :D

also I don't think the melody sounds so good at 0:24 because it's going some note's down but it is getting to much to the bassy sound if u know what u mean ;)

Keep it going and hopefully i will hear the total mix soon :D

Cahzmana responds:

yea i get what you mean at 0:24 but i had the same issue with the bass earlier (the bass was 1 octave higher at first which was TOO high)
so i tryed lowering the bass, and gave some variation to the melody.

thanks for your time man!!
C.

Rave time :D
Melody is really catchy
only could use some more mastering
and when u pitch up the melody that really sounded strange maybe u should add something like an uplifter before u pitch the melody up and ofcourse there need to be a nice ending

Keep it going!!!

This is really awsome and relaxing
could use a bit more mastering and it's far from finished but it is really good

Keep it going !!!

Legendarybucket responds:

Thanks ForeverBound, I really appreciate the response. I'm new to mastering. could you give me examples of what to do?

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