ForeverBound's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Milk It (WIP)]

Really loving the kick and the clap.
arround 2:25 i'm hearing a lot of desortion try to eq it a bit better
also intro is long but pretty good. I found that the release wasn't so good

but keep it going and good luck with your album ;)

[Q-6(Short Version)]

well making your own instruments is something that is pretty hard and i have the feeling that they can sound much better because they are still a bit basic. so i would suggest u to work on your instruments. not trying to be a faggot just trying to help u here because i know makeing your own sound from scrach is pretty hard work.

progression was a bit wack but the melodies where good.

Keep it going!!!

Abombination responds:

Thanks for the review. Im still pretty new to this. Im trying to get more instruments.

[Run Away]

Intro is pretty good. would have placed the hihat's a little bit more to the back
piano melody is really strong I like it. Pads are also good
translition at 2:15 can much better it is to much forced and u don't see it comming u relly need to fix that.
build up is good only missing some fx uplifters

so it's a pretty good song keep it going like this!!!

djahmusic responds:

Thank you for the informative feedback ^.^

[Drive Forward]

Sounds pretty good, althougt I would have used different instruments, more common one I guess because the melo's are great but the instrument's aren't so great.

also I'm missing progression in your track's so work on that. with progression it would be much better.
I would also suggest u to use uplifters to make the drops better and also your progression better.

Keep it going!!

swordsofe responds:

Thank you for being honest and for taking the time to listen, thats are I ever ask. In my class they ask us to make these tracks in less amount of time than anybody normally would. For this track I decided to use different instruments in the lead. I don't like to do the same thing to much so that is why I went with them. But like you said the track sounds totally different with regular instruments maybe even better. There are no real build ups in the track on perpus. Unlike a lot of people around here, I have studied music theory in depth so I try to find things that have not been done. You can imagine just how hard that really is. So like I tell everyone if you are going pick on me you have to listen to all of my music not just one track. lol P.S. I think it sucks cause I am actually playing the piano in this one, I am a epic metal guitarist not a sissy pianist lol.

[Melodie Classicum]

really loving the flute in this :D
also work more on the total picture of the song because there isn't a lot of flow, build up and drops

Keep it going :D