ForeverBound's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Massive(Remastered Remix)]

Really nice mate didn't expect this actually :D
but love it keep it going :D

Cahzmana responds:

me neither, but thanks u anyways lolz

[TimmY - AD (2013 Re-edit)]

Really Cahzmana style :D

also I don't think the melody sounds so good at 0:24 because it's going some note's down but it is getting to much to the bassy sound if u know what u mean ;)

Keep it going and hopefully i will hear the total mix soon :D

Cahzmana responds:

yea i get what you mean at 0:24 but i had the same issue with the bass earlier (the bass was 1 octave higher at first which was TOO high)
so i tryed lowering the bass, and gave some variation to the melody.

thanks for your time man!!
C.

[Sample song #2]

This is really awsome and relaxing
could use a bit more mastering and it's far from finished but it is really good

Keep it going !!!

Legendarybucket responds:

Thanks ForeverBound, I really appreciate the response. I'm new to mastering. could you give me examples of what to do?

[Q-6(Short Version)]

well making your own instruments is something that is pretty hard and i have the feeling that they can sound much better because they are still a bit basic. so i would suggest u to work on your instruments. not trying to be a faggot just trying to help u here because i know makeing your own sound from scrach is pretty hard work.

progression was a bit wack but the melodies where good.

Keep it going!!!

Abombination responds:

Thanks for the review. Im still pretty new to this. Im trying to get more instruments.

[Run Away]

Intro is pretty good. would have placed the hihat's a little bit more to the back
piano melody is really strong I like it. Pads are also good
translition at 2:15 can much better it is to much forced and u don't see it comming u relly need to fix that.
build up is good only missing some fx uplifters

so it's a pretty good song keep it going like this!!!

djahmusic responds:

Thank you for the informative feedback ^.^

[Drive Forward]

Sounds pretty good, althougt I would have used different instruments, more common one I guess because the melo's are great but the instrument's aren't so great.

also I'm missing progression in your track's so work on that. with progression it would be much better.
I would also suggest u to use uplifters to make the drops better and also your progression better.

Keep it going!!

swordsofe responds:

Thank you for being honest and for taking the time to listen, thats are I ever ask. In my class they ask us to make these tracks in less amount of time than anybody normally would. For this track I decided to use different instruments in the lead. I don't like to do the same thing to much so that is why I went with them. But like you said the track sounds totally different with regular instruments maybe even better. There are no real build ups in the track on perpus. Unlike a lot of people around here, I have studied music theory in depth so I try to find things that have not been done. You can imagine just how hard that really is. So like I tell everyone if you are going pick on me you have to listen to all of my music not just one track. lol P.S. I think it sucks cause I am actually playing the piano in this one, I am a epic metal guitarist not a sissy pianist lol.