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[Eternity]

pretty simplistic song but that can be really good. and in this way it is pretty good. used some nice translitions to not making it to repetive. I would actually make the kick a bit more powerfull and also change the bass a bit because it sounds weird but that might be because I'm on my headphones.

so keep it going ;)

Vee responds:

I hope thats a good thing and, ok!

[Stressing Disorder]

Sounds really good only the robotic voice in the end is a bit wack. also add some Hihat's , snares and claps to it.

Keep it going and i hope to hear the full version soon ;)

SP34K3RM4N responds:

Well i am gonna be adding some Hihat's and snares and claps too. *in the full version*

Anyway thanks for the review.

[Flying Battery Zone (RMX)]

It sounds pretty cool although the instruments for the main lead need some work and i think that i hear some false notes ( never heard the original )

but keep it up !!!

NucleonC3 responds:

There aren't any false notes (not really sure what you mean).

If you are talking about the 16th note delay for the other synth in the melody, well I just added that because it sounded cool.

Thanks!

~ Nucleon

[Anasi - Violet]

your piano is really nice, also the kick needs more punch and less bass. i'm missing a clap and some hihat's also the buildup wasn't that good. also add some more background layers because it's sounding a bit empty sometimes.

although the rest is pretty awsome needs a bit more mastering etc but I'm hearing a lot of potential in this track so keep it up ;)

Anasi responds:

I did a little more mastering, I kinda lost touch for working on this too long in one sitting.

This is First build, it will build again after this :3

[DJ DJ - Ur Mom = Ur Dad]

It doesn't really have any progression in it and it sounds really weird. It does sound a bit like Hardcore/Happy Hardcore and i guess that that's your goal to reach. I would suggest that u go back to the writing table and add some nice mello's in it. also deleted the lyrics in it it doesn't sound so good. the only really good thing in it is the kick. also try to layer your kick a bit more use snare, hihat's and claps to layer your kick and build it up.

so what really needs to be done are some nice melody's ( try some super saws ) and the total arangement of the song

Keep it up ;)

Casualty responds:

Appreciate the feedback, but you should know that all of my "DJ DJ" songs are actually a joke... Never meant to put more than 1-2 hours of effort in there.

[Massive(Remastered Remix)]

Really nice mate didn't expect this actually :D
but love it keep it going :D

Cahzmana responds:

me neither, but thanks u anyways lolz