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Work on the sounds u are using cause most of them do sound a weird also work on the structure of your song. It does have an intro and an outro but everything between that is just messy. I'm also missing a bass.

The big good thing about your track are the drums and the percs they are really good.

keep it going

SkyRiderX responds:

Thanks for the feedback! A couple of the synths did still bug me a bit so I'm going to rework them as well as adding more bass in. I'm glad the drums checked out fine cause they were my main concern to be honest and I put a lot of time into them. Thanks again for the feedback! Always helpful!

the intro and first verse is just amazing. The piano is actually horible. the second piece of piano is a lot better actually and could also be use as a break I guess.
The mastering was good nothing wrong with that.
So change the break and u will get a 5

Keep it going

OcularNebula responds:

yep!

This is pretty good altough It's not my taste of Music.

I voted 5 cause U didn't deserve the low score u had.

Keep it going :D

Charmanzer responds:

thanks man!! i haven't really found my genre yet :P if you like hardcore you might wanna check out "cemetery train" wich is a hardcore remix of candymans themesong.

cheers!

it is Hardcore for sure. also work on the arrangement of the track and at the translitions. the rest is really good actually.

so keep it going

Charmanzer responds:

okay thanks for the advice! =) glad you liked it overall!

first of all the vocals are to loud and especially in the klimax they don't sound so good. Also the lead is a bit to soft and doesn't really drag u away and give U that Trance felling. so what u can do is delet some vocals and make it's volume lower and also have a little bit of klimax ( prefferable the first part) without vocals and then add them when it repeats it self. ( like what the major artist does). add some volume to the bass would also be a bit higher and If u use massive sidechain u would still hear the kick.

these are just some tips actually. the melo is really cool tough I might one to remix it if your cool with that but well will see if i've got some time

Keep it going ;)

prodrift101 responds:

Thanks for your feedback. I literally just started using Parametric EQ to equalize my songs, I've still got a long way to go and I'm learning new things everyday.

A really like 80's/90's track especially with that tom :D

good job ;)

Oscar-is-Happy responds:

Thank you for the input ForeverBound! Your words are very much appreciated!

Really nice piano and great track. altough I would say it's more DnB like then Trance like.

also I've got the feeling the bass needs some more mastering and It does need a proper ending. That means no fade out. also add some more high notes for example with hihat's to the track that would really give it a bit of extra.

keep it going

Blackmajiick responds:

Well it's supposed to be a little darker, so I kind of wanted to avoid using a bunch of hi-hats and high notes. I also don't think it's fast enough to be DnB. I agree about the ending though.

Thanks for the review :D
(ending fixed)

Hearing a lot of good stuff in this track, Best thing for u to work on are the sounds and EQ etc. also the bass is to high and it takes away power of the kick u should side chain it.

also some bigger progression would also be cool.

Keep it going!!

ps: keep working alot on the kick and the bass worked for me too it does sound a lot better with a good kick and a warm bass

Norato responds:

Every synth. sound is sidechained in Grosbeat by NI ( not the usual ,sidechain, preset, I have my own for different sounds ). And yes, you are right about EQ thing. I have REALLY bad headphones so I eq it on what I know not what I hear... Really need new speakers :-/

YEAH a new track from u my friend wonderfull. It does need some mastering and the first instrument u hear is a bit meh but overal great track and welcome back ;)

KrisKrosNL responds:

Yeah, it's not well mastered, but I think the piano is just bad quality. I tried tweaking it a lot but it just stays bad.

Thanks for reviewing.

This is why I love u man, It's just amazing

petje af voor dit gewelidige stuk.

~one of your biggest fans

Cahzmana responds:

Lol thanks man!

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