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Love Light

2013-04-28 04:28:55

It feels a bit like an old hard dance track. but it does sound really good. I have nothing to complain about it ;)

so Keep it going ;)

AeronMusic responds:

Thanks man!

Pancakes (WIP)

2013-04-28 04:21:29

Sounds pretty decent but 1 thing that doesn't so good is when u pitchswift everything up at 0:16. so get rid of that and the rest does sound good. would love to hear the full version which i guess will be better masterd etc because the kick in this little piece is to much to the background.

so i voted 5 for u because it's not that good but u don't deserve a 1.85 on this

Keep it going ;)

benc98 responds:

"and the rest does sound good"
"for u because it's not that good"
.__.

Anyway, thanks for the review and advice, it's appreciated :-)

Eternity

2013-04-28 04:16:55

pretty simplistic song but that can be really good. and in this way it is pretty good. used some nice translitions to not making it to repetive. I would actually make the kick a bit more powerfull and also change the bass a bit because it sounds weird but that might be because I'm on my headphones.

so keep it going ;)

Vee responds:

I hope thats a good thing and, ok!

Stressing Disorder

2013-04-28 04:06:50

Sounds really good only the robotic voice in the end is a bit wack. also add some Hihat's , snares and claps to it.

Keep it going and i hope to hear the full version soon ;)

SP34K3RM4N responds:

Well i am gonna be adding some Hihat's and snares and claps too. *in the full version*

Anyway thanks for the review.

Flying Battery Zone (RMX)

2013-04-28 04:04:34

It sounds pretty cool although the instruments for the main lead need some work and i think that i hear some false notes ( never heard the original )

but keep it up !!!

NucleonC3 responds:

There aren't any false notes (not really sure what you mean).

If you are talking about the 16th note delay for the other synth in the melody, well I just added that because it sounded cool.

Thanks!

~ Nucleon

Hardstyle World WIP

2013-04-28 04:02:12

the translitions need work just like the kick and the total mastering. but the piano is actually cool. also layer your lead sounds and add some cool effects

but I like the way that u are trying HS :D
Keep it Up :)

Lyrebird responds:

Thanks for the advice. Cheers!

Anasi - Violet

2013-04-26 09:38:38

your piano is really nice, also the kick needs more punch and less bass. i'm missing a clap and some hihat's also the buildup wasn't that good. also add some more background layers because it's sounding a bit empty sometimes.

although the rest is pretty awsome needs a bit more mastering etc but I'm hearing a lot of potential in this track so keep it up ;)

Anasi responds:

I did a little more mastering, I kinda lost touch for working on this too long in one sitting.

This is First build, it will build again after this :3

DJ DJ - Ur Mom = Ur Dad

2013-04-26 09:31:03

It doesn't really have any progression in it and it sounds really weird. It does sound a bit like Hardcore/Happy Hardcore and i guess that that's your goal to reach. I would suggest that u go back to the writing table and add some nice mello's in it. also deleted the lyrics in it it doesn't sound so good. the only really good thing in it is the kick. also try to layer your kick a bit more use snare, hihat's and claps to layer your kick and build it up.

so what really needs to be done are some nice melody's ( try some super saws ) and the total arangement of the song

Keep it up ;)

Casualty responds:

Appreciate the feedback, but you should know that all of my "DJ DJ" songs are actually a joke... Never meant to put more than 1-2 hours of effort in there.

Stand Up - B4m Grae Karim