I have to say u have a nice piece of music here but in my opinion it needs to be tweaked here and there. So I hope this review will give u a helping hand but remember that's it's only my opinion most of the time.
The Good:
- kick is promenent and that's good in this genre. it's a nice kick to listen to and to gives this track a lot of drive so good job with that one
- bass: good sounding bass I would say it's even better then the old basses that where used in eurodance.
- piano really nice the piano and adds a lot of depth to this track in my opinion.
- melo: it's catchy it's easily to remember and it sounds good so yeah nice job on that one as well.
- the structure u used in this track is used a lot already, I'm putting this under good cause u used a structure and it prepares the listener to what's comming next. but by creativity of it it lacks a bit since it's used a lot.
- nice translitions nothing to say really just well done.
The Not So Good:
- In my opinion the intro was a little bit to long I would have cut it at 0:40 when the melo is played fully just to give the rest of the track a bit more power when the kick kicks in.
- The break was actually really bad, it was just the same generetic bass as in the rest of the track with the kick, I would say here is the most U could improve since it makes the track pretty repetive.
- as for the second part when the lead starts to kick in, well not a really big problem but I would suggest u add something to make it even better cause it's basicly the same as the 1st part of the track.
- then u have a verry fast translitions to the part where it seems the lead is 1 octave higher I would work on that a bit as well since the translition is good but it feels like the lead kicks in to much forced then it should be.
- also the clap is barly noticable in the whole mix while that's also one of the most import things to keep tracks like this going. U did a great job with the hihat but the clap lacks power.
so to conclude this list I would say that it sounds decent but not really special and when it comes to the break and the second part it starts even to be a bit repetive. As what I would give u as tip is that u add a melo in the break maybe witout the bass and the kick and add in some pads. as when u repeat the whole thing u use that melo ontop of the second time u repeat the melo in the climax. this way u have a fresh sounding break and also a fresh sounding climax.
If u have any questions then please don't hesitate to ask them